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    12월 1일

    A TeaR

                          A TeaR

     

    A tear that blows yr mind away

    ....Makes yr world sway

    ....Makes u dont know what to do

    ....Makes yr skin color change to blue

    A tear that stings like bees

    ....Can make u fly over seas

    ....Means alot

    ....Hits the spot

    A tear that makes yr heart bleed

    ....In yr heart grows a sad seed

    ....Cries out loud

    ....In yr head makes a screaming sound

    A tear that comes from someone so dear

    ....Whispers sad words in yr ear

    ....U wished it was in yr eye

    ....Makes u wonder WHY?.....

     

    ....WHY? wasnt i beside her now to wipe it from her cheeks with a kiss ,

    And hold her tight in my arms , this cute girl that my heart really miss....

     

    Sometimes i wish it was me instead ,

    Sometimes i wish i could hide u in my head ,

    Sometimes i wish i could erase all the things that they have said ,

    And remove this tears of blood they shed..

     

    But I'm just to far to make u feel right ,

    To turn yr black clouds into white ,

    To take u in my arms and have a nice flight ,

    In our dreams and reach the highest height ,

    And make u see the stars so bright ,

    Until u r tired & want to sleep & i kiss u and make the covers on u so tight ,

    And just stay beside u looking at yr beauty and just stay there all night...

    My lovely princess , my love , my eternal light......

     

    ** whenever u r sad just think of our love and fly in yr dreams cuz this is what i do , i just imagine u , cuz u make me feel great and so true**

     

     

                                                                                                      HameedO

                                                                                                   30 - 11 - 2005

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    TinklyNaughtygirl85_20 님이 남긴 글:
    this is a hearthful piece bgad
    12월 24일
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    Angel 님이 남긴 글:
    hey
    just stopped by t say hello
    the poem is so sweet!...but then life doesnt promise days without pain, laughter without sorrow, sun without rain, but it does promise strength for the day, comfort for the tears, and light for the way.....AND CARING PEOPLE LIKE YOU!
    keep smilin! (I really Love ur poems...they come straight from the heart)
    tc
    12월 20일
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    shawna253 님이 남긴 글:
    Do you have any specific long term goals? What is one and how do you plan on reaching it?

    SHawna
    12월 19일
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    shawna253 님이 남긴 글:
    If you could choose the manner of your death, what would it be?

    Shawna
    12월 19일
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    dyin2die 님이 남긴 글:
    dear ahmed .. pass by i have a question on my blog .. help me answer it
    12월 17일
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    shawna253 님이 남긴 글:
    Someone very close to you is in pain, paralyzed, and will die within a month. He begs you to give him poision so that he can die. Would you? What if it were your father?

    Shawna
    12월 13일
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    MEEMOZAD 님이 남긴 글:
    thanx 4 passin by ^_^
    ur space is gr8 .. and i have never read such gr8 words as urs..
    u should publish some kinda of book someday..
    take care salamzz ..
    12월 10일
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    saSsyasSin© 님이 남긴 글:
    hey zeee .. my latest blog doesnt refer 2 wtever's on ur mind
    chillz :)
    12월 9일
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    RnbwAyt 님이 남긴 글:
    Hi!!!
    You are really romantic...
    i can understand all the tears of both of yourss...
    hope it will turn the tears of happiness soon! i believe that missing can be also beautiful when you love someone deep...
    take care my friend
    12월 6일
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    DiLa 님이 남긴 글:
    ohh..wut a romantic poem:)...v v sweet!!!!:)
    really undescribly...all ur words are of encouragement;)
    I really adore Your Poems..and do enjoy reading em...
    Im happy dat i got ma pc back,so dat I can read all ur new:)
    Keep it UP:).....!!
    YaLLa:) have a wondaful time:)..Byez:)!!...


    *¤.¸.¤°´¯`¤ ღ PEaCE OuT ღ *¤.¸.¤°´¯`¤
    12월 5일
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    LadyOfSensibility 님이 남긴 글:
    Hi dear

    it's long time since i have been here
    but it;s so sad, so romantic, so touchin', & ....WHY? wasnt i beside her now to wipe it from her cheeks with a kiss ,
    And hold her tight in my arms , this cute girl that my heart really miss....so wonderful way to xpress

    have a nice day
    Moley
    12월 5일
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    shawna253 님이 남긴 글:
    Your house containing everything you own,catches fire; after saving your loved ones and pets, you have time to safely make a final dash to save any one item. What would it be?

    SHawna
    12월 4일
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    nody_feps 님이 남긴 글:
    Pain is wht we have ,
    suffer is wht we r in ,
    you both r away
    helpless and can't move a bin
    ur words are always toughy
    wht can i do then ,
    except saying '' u win ''

    woooow great rythem , keep up the perfect work , hope she is here to read tht ;)
    c ya
    12월 4일
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    dyin2die 님이 남긴 글:
    salam bro ...
    awesome .. u ask mehow is the poem .. id say .. it has struck me and brought my heart to tears ..
    i have a similar theme poem /. altghough ur poem is better but still here read it wen u have time ..
    god bless u .. and heal o n my expense ..
    well i think of death .. and i thin k of .... all my pains so tht i cud b m,ore hurt and i cud feel sad .. coz he is a fantacy ...
    http://spaces.msn.com/members/dying2die/Blog/cns!1pQRzfJhnBp0S0qMR_ZRpL6Q!467.entry
    byes
    12월 3일
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    bambi717 님이 남긴 글:
    hi nice poem and thanks for visiting with me i love christmas and the start of dec is to begin getting in that mood nice space you have come visit me again soon love to see you in any of my spaces hugs susan
    http://img43.imageshack.us/my.php?image=susan5fxmasangelhugs7echillz6h.jpg
    12월 3일
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    mona_alise 님이 남긴 글:
    Hi Ahmed,
    Thanks for your comment
    I feel quite good ;)
    have a gr8 day!

    ½ოჲnå³®

    PS Lovely poems :)
    12월 3일
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    lovable_natz 님이 남긴 글:
    hey..long time i havent been here..but as usual ur stuff is as gr8 as ever..seriously ur words r so touchin n so true!its just beautiful!
    12월 3일
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    babyangelwithoutwings01 님이 남긴 글:
    hi... thanks for passing by my space and leaving a comment, i liked when you said that i have a small jungle at home which a bit true...

    anyway, you have a very nice space so keep up the good work and keep on visiting my space as i will definitely visit yours all the time.

    take care... dee
    12월 3일
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    shawna253 님이 남긴 글:
    Hey question of the day is back.
    If the person you were engaged to marry had an accident and became a paraplegic, would you go through with the marriage or back out of it?
    Think about it and get back to me.

    Shawna
    12월 3일
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    ♀artìstica 님이 남긴 글:
    I could understand every tear... her feelings and yours and each fear... Love is a great gift from Alla, a bless that hides pain between its hands, but I do believe it worth, and it not worth only pain but to die for it, cause it's such a pure sacred feeling that let you fly to the nine cloud, let you forget everything, even the pain of it.. and the strange thing, that this whole world around you, transfer all of it in her/him... yes it's true.. and yeah it's weird enough to be true!
    12월 3일

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